morbid.. deal.
1) blackness
2) alarm show 7am
3)alone in bed
4) look in mirror is thin but sees fat (might cut this part out)
5) phone machine says 0 messages
6) red bird is in cage
7) lets birds out of window
8) shows closet and only red dress is there
9) puts on red dress
10) pull back shot
11) show gun (might cut this shot)
12) shoots self in head and blood turns into birds which fly away
haven't figured out what song to use, needs to be able a minute long section, Ive been considering the following, suggestions?:
Perfect Day- Lou Reed
What a Wonderful World- Louise Armstrong
something johnny cash or elliot smith perhaps
Comments
stop...don't do this all over again...you're the most brilliant star in the sky...
Posted by: qcool | November 21, 2006 10:20 PM
so i cant stop thinking about this one. perhaps you've already decided upon a track but thot i'd add a suggestion anyway. i was thinking that e. smith may be a little obvious but if you're gonna go that route, what about something from To: Elliot, From: Portland. was listening to and couldnt help but conjure your storyboards. reason i was gonna say dont go w/ elliott is perhaps its too obvious. which goes back to l. armstrong which could be a really good fit. and make it really interestingly backwards. i keep thinking something hot like some freaky miles davis acid-phase as well. i also just cued up "Its a Wonderful Life": Sparklehorse which really speaks to the literal again...but in a light way...maybe?! yes, check that one out, its 3 min but ends in such a great escape. okay that's all i have for now. addie you've always been amazingly talented and i cant imagine you've gotten any less!
Posted by: cory burnett | December 4, 2006 12:40 PM