For the feedback session I prepared a web text-based experience done in Twine which can be found here.

With the guests I’ve met got the following feedback:

  •  Interactions and intention can be not clear
  • Create a storytelling curve, with moments to emphasize certain emotions
  • Design more simple but effective interaction
  • Look for instruction based art
  • Create a ritual around the experience
  • Focusing on the tracing aspect of the experience
  • Not being obvious about the experience

With this my timeline will need to adjust a little bit considering more time for creating the narrative,, all the other aspects can be done as I’ve planned before. I want to focus into designing stronger interactions, so I must do some research about that, for really inducing the feelings I want during my experience.

It’s a fact as this project relies a lot on user interaction, it should be tested on a continuous form because from it will depend how effective will be.