Spent a lot of time doing some narrative adjustments and feels like it will never ends. Building a narrative for this has been an exciting journey but also a very demanding one, now I’ve decided to have a notebook just for all of the new ideas and reflection for the old ones, I think I’m becoming obsessed with mazes right now, I can see them on my daily life both direct or indirectly.

Decided to do my user test at feedback collective, so I kept my Twine mockup with adjustments from my early test on midterm presentations, and feedback I got from the session as well from a google form I did really struck me, I thought my Twine-text prototype it was only the mockup for the final product, but seems like people is getting engaged with the minimalistic approach of the plain text interface. Something which I will really take into account for the further development of this, maybe as this is a narrative project it will be better to center into that rather than making an impressive technologic demonstration.

Feels like I’m in a good place right now but really need to get things going with the production of the final piece, I think audio will be determinant because while text based interface was mentioned as being successful I can tell for the commentaries, audio was giving cohesiveness to the whole narrative thread.